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Thursday, June 11, 2020

My mum goes to Melbourne



Last  year in the summer on Monday at 8am
my mum and her mum went to Melbourne in
Australia to watch the Australian Open. They
stand at a hotel. When my mum was gon me
and my two brothers made a zipline for our
toys. We did the zipline off our bakney.  
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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousJune 17, 2020 at 2:32 PM

    Hi Maeve I relly like the way you wrote the story. It reminds me of bulding the gondala. Next time could you cheek the spaling and make shure it maks sence.

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