Thursday, September 3, 2020
I am a elephant
I woke up in the middle of the damp,wet jungle. I was looking for a water hole to drink out of. But then I saw some grass to eat so I ran over to it. But the grass was a trap the hunters had a net under the grass. Suddenly I was in the net hanging from the tree. I trumpeted and trumpeted but no one came. But then one day a herd of elephants came to save me and they got me down and they took me to their water hole. So that night I travelled 145 km to find tree bark. By day I found some and I gobbled it all up and had a drink using my trunk.
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Hi Maeve,
ReplyDeleteI can tell by your story that you did lots of research about elephants - well done! I wonder if you could add a picture so that people know what it's about before they read it? I also wonder if your title needs another capital letter 'I am an Elephant'?
Hi my name is Moses I need a little brother's friend. I like your Minecraft video I like it how it switches and you can see the roof
ReplyDeleteHi this is Geordie,
ReplyDeleteI like your elephant story because I like it and you do good writing and it makes sense. How did the elephant get trapped?
Hi Maeve I really like all of the describing words you have used. It reminds me of doing a description. Next time you could how many days were you stuck up in the net?
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