Friday, April 17, 2020
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Hi Maeve, what a great adventure the Little Red Boat had. I am so glad the soldiers got the Little Red Boat and repaired it. I loved seeing your writing on your blog. I wonder what your next story will be?
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Hey Maeve! I hope you are enjoying school at home! It looks like you are doing heaps of great work! I like how you wrote about Gallipoli as it is getting close to ANZAC day. Keep sharing all your amazing work on your blog!
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Super story Maeve. What inspired you to write about a little red boat, how did you come up with that idea? I also like how you are thinking about Gallipoli. A few questions I have are how did the sink and how did the soldiers repair the boat? Did the soldiers have to wait till the tide went out to then fix the boat? What tools did they use to fix the boat? Cant wait for the next story, great work!
ReplyDeleteMorning Maeve,Super story and very appropriate with Anzac this week.There is a lovely story about a soldier and a little red hen,and how he wanted to save the wee red hen.You would enjoy that story Maeve. Maybe this could be your next story.Leanne
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